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The two maps describe a number of changes which took place in the island with the introduction of tourism.

The two maps describe a number of changes which took place in the island with the introduction of tourism. Yg1XV
The two maps describe a number of changes which took place in the island with the introduction of tourism. In general, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the island was totally transformed in a number of different ways. Looking at the pictures, the island didn't have much before. It is surrounded by sea. At the right-hand side of the island is some trees. A beach is located in the west side of the island. After, this island have some big changes. In the middle side of the island, accommodation are built and there are also some on the west side of the island. There is a restaurant was constructed to the north of the island and directly opposite restaurant is the reception. On the south, a pier was erected, which allows boats to dock. On the west of the island, beach has now been converted into swimming area, where guests can walk to appreciate.
The two maps
describe
a number of
changes
which took place in the
island
with the introduction of tourism.

In general
, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the
island
was
totally
transformed in a number of
different
ways.

Looking at the pictures, the
island
didn't have much
before
. It
is surrounded
by sea. At the right-hand side of the
island
is
some
trees. A beach
is located
in the west side of the island.

After
, this
island
have
some
big
changes
. In the middle side of the
island
, accommodation
are built
and there are
also
some
on the west side of the
island
. There is a restaurant
was constructed
to the north of the
island
and
directly
opposite restaurant is the reception. On the south, a pier
was erected
, which
allows
boats to dock. On the west of the
island
, beach has
now
been converted
into swimming area, where guests can walk to appreciate.
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