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The two maps compare recreational facilities which were built in two different time on a certain island.

The two maps compare recreational facilities which were built in two different time on a certain island. BJEdd

The two maps compare recreational facilities which were built in two different time on a certain island. In the first map, it seems quite obvious, that there is not much tourist facility on the island for tourist except a small coastal area for swimming on the left side of the island. Also, there are some trees planted in the eastern and western part of the island. However, in the second map there are changes. Firstly a reception was built in the middle of the island, and it was connected to a restaurant in the northern part and to a pier in the southern part by car track. There are also some boats around the pier for sailing. Secondly, many accommodation units were constructed in the left and right side of the reception which are connected to each other by footpath. Overall, as can be seen, many buildings were built on the island, so there are many possibilities for tourists.

The two maps compare recreational facilities which were built
 in two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 time on a certain island.

In the first
 map, it seems quite obvious, that there is not much tourist facility on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 for tourist except a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 coastal area for swimming on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Also
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 trees planted in the eastern and western part of the island.

However
, in the second map there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. Firstly
 a reception was built
 in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, and it was connected
 to a restaurant in the northern part and to a pier in the southern part by car This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
. There are also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 boats around the pier for sailing. Secondly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 accommodation units were constructed
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 and right side of the reception which are connected
 to each other by footpath.

Overall
, as can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 buildings were built
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 possibilities for tourists. 