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The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features

The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 9krw
The given pictures show the ways of access to a hospital named city in both 2007 and 2010 respectively. This essay explains both of them. Overall, the hospital has seperated, built and replaced various segments such as car parking, bus station, ring road which were not as effectively built as recent plan did. The new face is more comfortable to people and the staff. The old access consists of one stright road from the city road also a smaller combined parking to everyone. Bus stop stands very far from hospital while ring road has lesser entries. Meanwhile, the new infrastructure consists of seperate car parking for patients and staff. Every possible route now has four entries to ease the traffic while the bus stand is now very near to the hospital so that the patients need not to walk more.
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show
the ways of access to a
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named city in both 2007 and 2010
respectively
. This essay
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explains
both of them.

Overall
, the
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hospital
has
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seperated
, built and replaced various segments such as car parking, bus station, ring
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road
which were not as
effectively
built as recent plan did. The new face is more comfortable to
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people
and the staff.

The
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old
access consists of one
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stright
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road
from the city
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road
also
a smaller combined parking to everyone. Bus
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stop
stands
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very
far from
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hospital
while ring
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road
has lesser entries.

Meanwhile, the new infrastructure consists of
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seperate
car parking for patients and staff. Every possible route
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now
has four entries to
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ease
the traffic while the bus stand is
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now
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very
near to the
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hospital
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so
that the patients need not
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IELTS academic The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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