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The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table shows the number of item sold by a coffee shop that located in office buildung in one day. Overall, coffee is a most dominant selling item for whole day, followed by Pastries and sandwiches which is second and third respectively. However, Tea is least favourite item amongst public. In morning time, the highest selling item is a pastries with 275, which followed by coffee with 265. However, the number of tea and sendwiches is less as compare to coffee and pastries. there were 110 tea and 50 sandwiches sold by shop between 7. 30 and 10. 30. From10: 30 to 14: 30, the number of sold item was decline in three items except sandwiches which increased and peaked at 200. After 14: 30, coffee and pastries again dominated type in the number of sold items with 150 for pastries and 145 for coffee. Between 17: 30-20: 30, the proportion of coffee, tea and sandwiches increased and reached to 200, 75 and 110 respectively while the number of pastries experienced sudden fall and rest at 80.
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shop that located in office
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and sandwiches which is second and third
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amongst public.

In morning time, the highest selling
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with 275, which followed by
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with 265.
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were 110
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and 50 sandwiches sold by shop between 7. 30 and 10. 30. From10: 30 to 14: 30, the
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of sold
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was decline in three
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except sandwiches which increased and peaked at 200.

After 14: 30,
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again dominated type in the
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with 150 for
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pastries
and 145 for
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coffee
. Between 17: 30-20: 30, the proportion of
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coffee
,
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and sandwiches increased and reached to 200, 75 and 110
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experienced sudden fall and rest at 80.

IELTS academic The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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