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Electricity production via geothermal energy

Electricity production via geothermal energy Kr06
The given process diagram illustrates about how electricity has been generating through geothermal energy. Overall, in the geothermal power plant mainly five steps are required to produce light. It can be seen from the diagram that, in the first step cold water is being filled, which has been pumped down upto 4. 5km. Next, the injection well grabs the cold water in the geothermal zone where hot rocks presented. Mixing with hot rocks, water also becomes hot. After that, in the third stage, where this hot water is being pumped upward by the production well. Furthermore, it stored in the condenser, fourth step of process, where steam generates. Finally, these steam goes through turbine first and generator later. In turbine it powered by steam and generator produce the electricity. This directly transferred to the big tower of light.
The
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given
process diagram illustrates about how electricity has been generating through geothermal energy.

Overall
, in the geothermal power plant
mainly
five steps
are required
to produce light.

It can be
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seen
from the diagram that, in the
first
step
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cold
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water
is
being filled
, which has
been pumped
down
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upto
4.
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5km
.
Next
, the injection well grabs the
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cold
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water
in the geothermal zone where hot rocks presented. Mixing with hot rocks,
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water
also
becomes hot.

After that, in the third stage, where this hot
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water
is
being pumped
upward by the production well.
Furthermore
, it stored in the condenser, fourth step of process, where steam generates.
Finally
, these steam goes through turbine
first
and generator later. In
The comma is probably missing here: "turbine, it".
turbine it
powered by steam and generator produce the electricity. This
directly
transferred to the
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big
tower of light.
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IELTS academic Electricity production via geothermal energy

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
138 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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