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The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries

The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries pp12
The provided tables represent the information about the proportion of the population who are 65 years old and over in the Canada, Germany and the U. K during the time period in 1988, 2000 and an estimated percentage in 2030. The data has been given in percentage. Overall, the population of elderly people was slightly increase in three countries from 1980 to 2030. The highest percentage of older people was in Germany. The lowest proportion in the U. K over the period given. In 1988, the elderly people population was 16. 32% in Canada. In the year of 2000 elderly people population increase near by 4%. In the Germany elderly people population were 20. 45 percentage in 1988, whereas the in 2000 it was slightly increase 25. 32%. In the U. K figure showed little change in the proportion of elderly people it was remain at just under 15% in the both years. By 2030 the population of people aged 65 and it will increase near by 5%in all three nations. The percentage will reach in 2030, 30. 42% in Germany, 26. 35% in Canada and 20. 35 %in the U. K
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and over in the Canada, Germany and the U. K during the time period in 1988, 2000 and an estimated
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was in Germany. The lowest proportion in the U. K over the period
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were 20. 45
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under 15% in the both years.

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