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the graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new zealand between 1901 and 2101

the graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in new zealand between 1901 and 2101 m7LO

The assigned linear representation illustrates information regarding alteration occurred in the rates of birth and death in new Zealand since 1901 till 2101. Overall, a cursory glance on the table is enough to make clear that although death ratio was lower at beginning, it outraced birth rate at the end of period. As can be seen from the graph, birth rate was stood at 20000s in 1901, inclined to 30000s by 1921, after that it plummeted by approximately 3000s in 1940. on the contrary, It swelled steeply from 30000s in 1941 to 50000s in 1951, followed upward trend to reach zenith, that was about 65000s in 1961 however this trend was suddenly broken and figure plummeted to 50000s in 1981 it is anticipated that the value will plunged to around 42000s by 2101. Probing ahead, initially, the death rate was 10000s in 1901. The figure underwent flux throughout the period of 10 decades and hit 29000s in 2001. A considerable rise is forecasted in death rate till 2051 which remain at plateau from 2061 to 2101.

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rates
 of birth and death in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.New Zealand
new Zealand
 since 1901 till 2101.

Overall
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enough
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that although death ratio was lower at beginning, it outraced birth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of period.

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seen
 from the graph, birth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
was stood
 at 20000s in 1901, inclined to 30000s by 1921, after that it plummeted by approximately 3000s in 1940. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the contrary, It swelled steeply
 from 30000s in 1941 to 50000s in 1951, followed upward trend to reach zenith, that was about 65000s in 1961 however
 this trend was suddenly
 broken and figure plummeted to 50000s in 1981 it is anticipated
 that the value will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "plunge"plunge
plunged
 to around 42000s by 2101.

Probing ahead, initially
, the death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 was 10000s in 1901. The figure underwent flux throughout the period of 10 decades and hit 29000s in 2001. A considerable rise is forecasted
 in death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 till 2051 which remain at plateau from 2061 to 2101. 