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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. wB7kn
The two maps illustrates the access of road to a city hospital in the year between 2007 and 2010. overall, it is given in the maps, there is city hospital which have a lot of changes in the car park with the addition of two rounding roads and a bus station. In 2007, there was a city hospital which is sorrounded by the ring road and its all sides with hospital road. furthermore, there was a facilities of car park for all the staff and public. Additionally, there was a city road which is either side of hospital road to go the city hospital for all the people. In 2010, the two round roads were constructed. The city hospital which is sorrounded by the ring road is same and it have no any change. Moreover, there is a public car park which is near to the city hospital and another side of two round roads there is a parking area for all the staff of hospital. further more, there is a bus station which go towards to hospital and city road.
The two maps illustrates the access of
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to a city
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in the year between 2007 and 2010.
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in the maps, there is city
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hospital
which have
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changes
in the car park with the addition of two rounding
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roads
and a bus station. In 2007, there was a city
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hospital
which is
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road
and its all sides with
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hospital
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.
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furthermore
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of car park for all the staff and public.
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, there was a city
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which is either side of
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to go the city
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for all the
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people
. In 2010, the two round
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were constructed
. The city
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which is
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is same and it
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, there is a public car park which is near to the city
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and another side of two round
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there is a parking area for all the staff of
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more, there is a bus station which go towards to
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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