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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. aM9V
The two maps illustrate the access to a city hospital in the year 2007 and 2010. Overall, It is noticeable that the route had been significantly changed during the year 2010, with the addition of bus station, roundabouts and separate carpark. In year 2007, city hospital was located in the centre of ring road, which was connected to the hospital road. There was an area to the east of the hospital for staff members and public. Moreover, there were 6 bus stops, 3 on each side of the hospital road. In year 2010, the infrastructure of road network had been modified. Firstly, a novel public car park was constructed at the east side of the city hospital while the staff car park was still at the southeast corner of the hospital. Addition of two roundabouts was noticed at hospital road connected to the junction of ring road and the other towards the south of the hospital road, linking hospital road with the City Road. Bus stop at the hospital road had been removed and replaced by bus station located at the west side of the city hospital.
The two maps illustrate the access to a city
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hospital
in the
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year
2007 and 2010.
Overall
, It is noticeable that the route had been
significantly
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changed
during the
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year
2010, with the addition of bus station, roundabouts and separate
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carpark
. In
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year
2007, city
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hospital
was located
in the
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centre
of ring
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road
, which
was connected
to the
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hospital
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road
. There was an area to the east of the
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hospital
for staff members and public.
Moreover
, there were 6
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bus
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stops
, 3 on each side of the
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hospital
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road
. In
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year
2010, the infrastructure of
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road
network had
been modified
.
Firstly
, a novel public car park
was constructed
at the east side of the city
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hospital
while the staff car park was
still
at the southeast corner of the
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hospital
. Addition of two roundabouts
was noticed
at
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hospital
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road
connected to the junction of ring
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road
and the other towards the south of the
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hospital
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road
, linking
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hospital
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road
with the City
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Road
. Bus
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stop
at the
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hospital
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road
had
been removed
and replaced by bus station located at the west side of the city
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hospital
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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