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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. g6Bd

The chart shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods. Generally in the past men that attended studies are more than women, but in the last years, women have passed men. In the first period, men in part-time education are more than women, and they have arrived at 1000 thousand of them while women were less than 800 thousand; the same in full-time education, women were less than men. In the second period, men were less than the first one in part-time education but even more than women. The chart of women in part-time education from the first one to the last one has grown a lot until to pass the men chart and to arrive over 1000 thousand. The chart of full-time education is totally different numbers compared to part-time education. The bars start from 100 thousand to arrive at few more than 200 thousand. In the end, there are a lot of differences between part-time education and full-time numbers, but women chart has grown more than the men ones.

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