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The given line graph describes the amount of margaraine, low fat and reduced spreads and butterc, consumed over the span of 26 years. The consumption is measured in Grams. Overall, in the final years, low fat and reduced spreads were the most consumed although its use started with a very low level, years after the two others spreads. In contrast there was a significant decrease in the utilzation of margaraine and butter despite their popularity at the first of the period. In 1981, butter had the highest amout of consumption with just over 140 Grams, which increased between 1981 and 1986 to reach a peak of precisely 160 Grams in 1986, after this rise there was a dramatic drop throughout the period from 1986 to 2007, in which butter attained its lowest point about 40 Grams. Meanwhile, the use of margaraine flacuated from over 80 Grams to 100 Grams, then plateaued, before it started gradually decreasing to end up in 40 Grams. Consumption of low fat and reduced spreads began 15 years later after the two others kinds, exactely in 1996 with a very small quantity and then it rose sharply to arrive to morginally above 80 Grams, after which there was a slight decrease to approximately 70 Grams in 2007.
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describes
the amount of
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margaraine
,
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
and
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butterc
, consumed over the span of 26 years. The consumption
is measured
in Grams.

Overall
, in the final years,
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
were the most consumed although its
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use
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started
with a
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very
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low
level, years after the two others
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spreads
. In
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contrast
there was a significant decrease in the
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utilzation
of
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margaraine
and butter despite their popularity at the
first
of the period.

In 1981, butter had the highest
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amout
of consumption with
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just
over 140
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Grams
, which increased between 1981 and 1986 to reach a peak of
precisely
160
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Grams
in 1986, after this rise there was a dramatic drop throughout the period from 1986 to 2007, in which butter attained its lowest point about 40 Grams.

Meanwhile, the
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use
of
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margaraine
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flacuated
from over 80
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Grams
to 100
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Grams
, then plateaued,
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before
it
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started
gradually
decreasing to
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end
up in 40 Grams.

Consumption of
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low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
began 15 years later after the two others kinds,
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exactely
in 1996 with a
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very
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small
quantity and then it rose
sharply
to arrive to
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morginally
above 80
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Grams
, after which there was a slight decrease to approximately 70
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Grams
in 2007.
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