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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. AM7N
The diagram below illustrates, the information about the 14 stages of manufacturing of consumer goods, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier steps to enable adjustments. As the process clearly shows the first stage of product development is collection and storage of raw materials and manufacturing components. The second stage involves designing of the products and production planning and it’s a lengthy process which includes supervision and monitoring designing progress frequently, and before market surveys, it is necessary to test the product to be aware the quality of the product. If the product is quality wise good, then the next stage is packing of the products and make advertising for sale. In this production and manufacturing process, there are mainly two types of processes- the flow of manufacturing process and the flow of information feedback. In summary, it is value chain development process that starts from collection of raw materials to the end or final product for sale, in each stage of this manufacturing process value is added to products.
The diagram below illustrates, the information about the 14
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manufacturing
of consumer
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goods
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process
by which information
is fed
back to earlier steps to enable adjustments.

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process
clearly
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first
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stage
of
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product
development is collection and storage of raw materials and
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manufacturing
components. The second
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stage
involves designing of the
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products
and production planning and it’s a lengthy
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process
which includes supervision and monitoring designing progress
frequently
, and
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before
market surveys, it is necessary to
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test
the
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product
to be aware the quality of the
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product
. If the
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product
is quality wise
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good
, then the
next
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stage
is packing of the
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products
and
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make
advertising for sale. In this production and
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manufacturing
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process
, there are
mainly
two types of
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processes-
the flow of
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manufacturing
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process
and the flow of information feedback.

In summary, it is value chain development
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process
that
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starts
from collection of raw materials to the
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end
or final
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product
for sale, in each
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manufacturing
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process
value is
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added
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products
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

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