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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. aMrP
The maps outline the changes that took place in a public park called Grange Park from 1920 to today. Overall, there was no changes made between the entrance of the park and rose garden which was located in the center and north-east of the location. The main noticeable change throughout the changes is made in fountain which is replaced by rose garden. As the diagram shows, the main detectable change is made in the center of Grange park which is destroyed and reconstructed by rose garden. Moreover, there was no facility of parking car in before 1920 but today Entrance underground parking is constructed near water feature which is reconstructed in the replacement of glasshouse. Before, in 1920 all the facilities of use to be at the side corner of the location but at present, it is shifted towards the rose garden and surrounded with more facilities of seats. Furthermore, before at the location of south-west there was a great stage for musicians to facilitate people but now, it has changed and reconstructed into Amphitheater for concerts with large figure in area. At the right side of entrance at North-east rose garden and pond for water plants is removed and it is replaced by café and children’s play area.
The maps outline the
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changes
that took place in a public
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park
called Grange
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Park
from 1920 to
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today
.

Overall
, there was no
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changes
made between the entrance of the
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park
and
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rose
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garden
which
was located
in the center and north-east of the location. The main noticeable
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change
throughout the
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changes
is made
in fountain which
is replaced
by
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rose
garden.

As the diagram
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shows
, the main detectable
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change
is made
in the center of Grange
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park
which is
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destroyed
and reconstructed by
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rose
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garden
.
Moreover
, there was no facility of parking car in
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before
1920
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but
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today
Entrance underground parking
is constructed
near water feature which
is reconstructed
in the replacement of glasshouse.
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Before
, in 1920 all the facilities of
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use to
be at the side corner of the location
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but
at present, it
is shifted
towards the
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rose
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garden
and surrounded with more facilities of seats.

Furthermore
,
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before
at the location of south-west there was a great stage for musicians to facilitate
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people
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but
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now
, it has
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changed
and reconstructed into Amphitheater for concerts with large figure in area.
The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on the right side"?
At the right side
of entrance at North-east
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rose
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garden
and pond for water plants
is removed
and it
is replaced
by café and children’s play area.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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4 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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