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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. aMrP

The maps outline the changes that took place in a public park called Grange Park from 1920 to today. Overall, there was no changes made between the entrance of the park and rose garden which was located in the center and north-east of the location. The main noticeable change throughout the changes is made in fountain which is replaced by rose garden. As the diagram shows, the main detectable change is made in the center of Grange park which is destroyed and reconstructed by rose garden. Moreover, there was no facility of parking car in before 1920 but today Entrance underground parking is constructed near water feature which is reconstructed in the replacement of glasshouse. Before, in 1920 all the facilities of use to be at the side corner of the location but at present, it is shifted towards the rose garden and surrounded with more facilities of seats. Furthermore, before at the location of south-west there was a great stage for musicians to facilitate people but now, it has changed and reconstructed into Amphitheater for concerts with large figure in area. At the right side of entrance at North-east rose garden and pond for water plants is removed and it is replaced by café and children’s play area.

The maps outline the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 that took place in a public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 called Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 from 1920 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
.

Overall
, there was no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
 made between the entrance of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 which was located
 in the center and north-east of the location. The main noticeable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
changes
is made
 in fountain which is replaced
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
 garden.

As the diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
, the main detectable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
is made
 in the center of Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and reconstructed by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
. Moreover
, there was no facility of parking car in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 1920 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 Entrance underground parking is constructed
 near water feature which is reconstructed
 in the replacement of glasshouse. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
, in 1920 all the facilities of Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 be at the side corner of the location This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at present, it is shifted
 towards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and surrounded with more facilities of seats.

Furthermore
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 at the location of south-west there was a great stage for musicians to facilitate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and reconstructed into Amphitheater for concerts with large figure in area. The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on the right side"?On the right side
At the right side
 of entrance at North-east You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and pond for water plants is removed
 and it is replaced
 by café and children’s play area. 