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The two maps below show Road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show Road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. W765
The illustrated maps elucidates the information about Road connected to a city hospital in year 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is noticeable that road access to a city hospital has been upgraded. Bus Station and separate car parking was constructed for both staff and public in given period of time. It is vividly clear, that in 2007, City Hospital road has three bus-stops on both sides. Moreover, there was a car parking for both employees and citizens, which was situated in south east direction of hospital. Furthermore, hospital was surrounded by the ring from all the sides, which was connected to the hospital Road near the entrance of car Park. Proceeding further, the after 3 years in year 2010, hospital was redeveloped and various things were added, such as two roundabouts were developed. One was in front of City Hospital, whereas another was connected with bus-station road, Hospital road and City Road. furthermore, separate car parking was built for both workers and patients, in 2010. Moreover, six bus-stops were demolished and combined bus stand were erected in the left side of staff car parking.
The illustrated maps elucidates the information about
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Road
connected to a city
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hospital
in year 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it is noticeable that
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road
access to a city
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hospital
has
been upgraded
. Bus Station and separate
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car
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parking
was constructed
for both staff and public in
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given
period of time. It is
vividly
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clear
, that in 2007, City
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Hospital
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road
has three bus-
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stops
on both sides.
Moreover
, there was a
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car
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parking
for both employees and citizens, which
was situated
in
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south east
direction of
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hospital
.
Furthermore
,
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hospital
was surrounded
by the ring from all the sides, which
was connected
to the
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hospital
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Road
near the entrance of
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car
Park. Proceeding
further
, the after 3 years in year 2010,
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hospital
was redeveloped
and various things were
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added
, such as two roundabouts
were developed
. One was in front of City
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Hospital
, whereas another
was connected
with bus-station
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road
,
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Hospital
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road
and City
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Road
.
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furthermore
, separate
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car
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parking
was built
for both workers and patients, in 2010.
Moreover
, six bus-
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stops
were demolished
and combined bus stand
were erected
in the
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left
side of staff
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car
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parking
.

IELTS academic The two maps below show Road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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