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The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000 n2LE
The information about the money that utilised in distinct sectors with a fixed budget by the UAE government is depicted in pie chart overall it notice that more money consumed by social security at AED where is the lowest funds are spent in transport AED looking at the information in more detail in the UAE government make a budget to spend money on different sectors where is the social security has used 100 billion and then health and personal social services consume 253 billion The Other expenditure AED and debit interest used to spend money similarly 23billion, then 38 billion money spent on education by UAE government furthermore, the UAE government spent 30 billion and 50 Billion orderly in industrial agriculture and employment and Housing heritage and environment aed in 2000 moreover defence excuse 22 billion from budget lastly 17 billion money is consumed by law and order aed and poorly 9 billion funds spent in transport by UAE government in 2000
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