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The maps show changes in a local industrial village of england called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015

The maps show changes in a local industrial village of england called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015 lgV9

The alterations in a domestic industrial village of Stamdforf in the United Kingdom from 1985 to 2015 is depicted in the maps. Generally speaking, It is apparent from the information supplied that the local industry in the maps has several significant changes and a number of facilities were added, converted and moved. In the year 1985, there was the straight main road which was Arlington flowed from southeast to northwest and there were the small roadside inns which located beside the main road. While the wooden bridge nearby big factory across the Thames river that flowed from southwest to northeast. Some trees grew in the right of filed and spread in the other places. In contrast, in the next 3 decades, there were some facilities which moved to other places. The main field moved to beside the Thames river due to housing estate 1 was built, and small roadside inns moved to the south-east owing to the industrial staff was constructed. And then the wooden bridge which was located in the Arlington road was changed with a steel bridge. While some facilities were constructed such as the industry in the top and housing estate 2 below the maps.

The alterations in a domestic industrial village of Possible spelling mistake found.Stamford
Stamdforf
 in the United Kingdom from 1985 to 2015 is depicted
 in the maps.

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 speaking, It is apparent from the information supplied that the local industry in the maps has several significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 and a number of facilities were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
, converted and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
.

In the year 1985, there was the straight main road which was Arlington flowed from southeast to northwest and there were the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 roadside inns which located beside the main road. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the wooden bridge nearby This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 factory across the Thames river that flowed from southwest to northeast. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 trees grew in the right of filed and spread in the other places.

In contrast
, in the next
 3 decades, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to other places. The main field This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to beside the Thames river due to housing estate 1 was built
, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 roadside inns This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the south-east owing to the industrial staff was constructed
. And then the wooden bridge which was located
 in the Arlington road was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 with a steel bridge. While This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities were constructed
 such as the industry in the top and housing estate 2 below the maps. 