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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. GMwVL
The maps represent road access to a hospital in the city in the years 2007 and 2010. Overall, some changes were made during the three years period, some new facilities were created, which improved the infrastructure of the city hospital. On both sides of the Hospital Road several bus stops were in 2007, whereas after three years it was liquidated. On the left side of the road the new bus station was created. The new roundabouts were established, where the first one connected Ring road with the bus station and staff car park. Second roundabout played a crucial role in the connection of City road and Hospital road. In the south direction from the city hospital car park initially was operated for both staff and public, however in the year 2010 everything has changed in the favor of staff. However, the new car park was constructed in the east part of the hospital, where the public had a great opportunity for parking.
The maps represent
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access to a
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hospital
in the city in the years 2007 and 2010.

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changes
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during the three years period,
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new
facilities
were created
, which
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improved
the infrastructure of the city hospital.

On both sides of the
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Hospital
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Road
several bus
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stops
were in 2007, whereas after three years it
was liquidated
. On the
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left
side of the
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road
the
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new
bus station
was created
. The
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new
roundabouts
were established
, where the
first
one connected Ring
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road
with the bus station and staff car park. Second roundabout played a crucial role in the connection of City
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road
and
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Hospital
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road
. In the south direction from the city
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hospital
car park
initially
was operated
for both staff and public,
however
in the
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year
2010 everything has
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changed
in the favor of staff.
However
, the
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new
car park
was constructed
in the east part of the
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hospital
, where the public had a great opportunity for parking.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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