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The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities. m12B8
The given map shows the changes made for the tourists’ conveniences on an island. As it is shown on the given map, lots of new constructions took place on the island including restaurant, accommodation and footpath. Before the constructions took place on the island, there were no accommodation facilities there. Only few trees were present on the first map that showed the island before it was renovated for the tourists. The second map, that represents the island’s view after the renovations reveals the changes that were made for this island. A restaurant was built there and many accommodation facilities were made so that tourists can stay there. Reception area was in front of the restaurant and the accommodations were made in circles near the beach. Interestingly trees were not cut and most of the constructions were near the beach area. Pathway for walking to the restaurant, beach and pier were made for the visitors and boats were introduced for the tourists. In the second map, vehicle tracks could be found which denotes the tourists’ facility to use transportation system in the island.
The
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given
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map
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shows
the
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changes
made for the
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tourists’
conveniences on an
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island
. As it
is shown
on the
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given
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map
, lots of new constructions took place on the
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island
including
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restaurant
,
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accommodation
and footpath.

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Before
the constructions took place on the
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island
, there were no
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accommodation
facilities there.
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Only
few trees were present on the
first
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map
that
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showed
the
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island
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before
it
was renovated
for the tourists.

The second
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map
, that represents the
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island’s
view after the renovations reveals the
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changes
that
were made
for this
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island
. A
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restaurant
was built
there and
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many
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accommodation
facilities
were made
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so
that
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tourists
can stay there. Reception area was in front of the
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restaurant
and the accommodations
were made
in circles near the beach.
Interestingly
trees were not
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cut
and most of the constructions were near the beach area.

Pathway for walking to the
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restaurant
, beach and pier
were made
for the visitors and boats
were introduced
for the
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tourists
. In the second
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map
, vehicle
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tracks
could
be found
which denotes the
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tourists’
facility to
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use
transportation system in the
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island
.

IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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