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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. 85QmP
The line graph illustrates how many number of car thefts are took place in four different countries, thefts for per thousand vehicles. From the years 1990 to 1999. Overall, it is evident that Great Britain was experienced high car thefts among other countries. however, Sweden was experienced significant rose through the period. With regards to great Britain, the highest number of car thefts with a fluctuations from the beginning to ending of the period was nearly between the range of (19000-20000). However, in Sweden the thefts rate was 5000 cars in the starting year, and it experience a rapid increase three fold by the end of the year. In 1990, the number of car thefts in both France and Canada was approximately 7000 and around 9000 respectively. Whereas in France the theft rate was experienced a downward trend by the end of period nearly 5000, similarly, in Canada the theft rate is declined almost equal to France thefts rate by the year 1999.
The line graph illustrates how
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of
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car
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thefts
are
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took
place in four
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different
countries,
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thefts
for per thousand vehicles. From the years 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, it is evident that Great Britain
was experienced
high
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car
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thefts
among other countries.
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however
, Sweden
was experienced
significant rose through the period.
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With regards to
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great Britain
, the highest number of
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car
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thefts
with
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a fluctuations
from the beginning to ending of the period was
nearly
between the range of (19000-20000).
However
, in Sweden the
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thefts
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rate
was 5000
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cars
in the starting
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year
, and it
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experience
a rapid increase
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three fold
by the
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end
of the
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year
. In 1990, the number of
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car
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thefts
in both France and Canada was approximately 7000 and around 9000
respectively
. Whereas in France the
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theft
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rate
was experienced
a downward trend by the
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end
of period
nearly
5000,
similarly
, in Canada the
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theft
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rate
is declined
almost equal to France
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thefts
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rate
by the
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year
1999.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

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163 words
6.0
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