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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of electricity by the way of geothermal power plants. Overall, several steps are required for the electricity production, starting up with the usage of cold water and ending up with the generator turbine. Firstly, the water should be not hot in the consumption and it is pumped down to the length of 4. 5 km. Secondly, the injection well plays a crucial role in the water transferring to the geothermal zone. In this stage, the cold water is becoming hot and hot rocks continue their way and reach the production well. Then, the hot water spontaneously pumped up to the condenser, the place where the water is kept for a certain period. After that, through the pipeline, the hot liquid substance moves to the generator turbine. The hot water powers there by steam, going in the direction of the turbine it powers and produces electricity. Last, the electricity towards the plant, where the final electricity is obtained.
The diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of
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electricity
by the way of geothermal power plants.

Overall
, several steps
are required
for the
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electricity
production, starting up with the usage of
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cold
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water
and ending up with the generator turbine.

Firstly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
should be not hot in the consumption and it
is pumped
down to the length of 4. 5 km.
Secondly
, the injection well plays a crucial role in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
transferring to the geothermal zone. In this stage, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is becoming hot and hot rocks continue their way and reach the production well.

Then, the hot
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water
spontaneously
pumped up to the condenser, the place where the
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water
is
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kept
for a certain period. After that, through the pipeline, the hot liquid substance
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moves
to the generator turbine. The hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
powers there by steam, going in the direction of the turbine it powers and produces
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electricity
. Last, the
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electricity
towards the plant, where the final
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electricity
is obtained
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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