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The diagram depicts the sequential process involved the manufacturing of lead pencil. The first feature to begin is planting the trees to later carry out the pencil body. Starting with seeding and waiting for the trees growth by 4 months before bringing the growth sprout to the replanting process. Following this, the rising trees have been turned into the progress of thinning by 3 years afterwards. When this step has been done, the full-grown trees would be cut down prior to wood separation for next forming the thin slats then sent to threaded process for 60 days so that the slats surface will be refined. It is only after this stage that the thin slats will be grooved and glued by black lead before putting the new slat sheet over likewise sandwich. All compact slats have been brought to apply with a molding technique called hard-pressing including heat feed. As a result, a cutting machine has splitted off those compositions of slats to the pencil bars. Finally, the pencils have been painted, sharpened and stamped the logo before sumed as a package at the end.

The diagram depicts the sequential process involved the manufacturing of lead pencil.

The first
 feature to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 is planting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 to later carry out the pencil body. Starting with seeding and waiting for the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "trees'" or "tree's"?trees'tree's
trees
 growth by 4 months This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 bringing the growth sprout to the replanting process. Following this, the rising You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 have been turned
 into the progress of thinning by 3 years afterwards. When this step has been done
, the full-grown You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down prior to wood separation for next
 forming the thin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to threaded process for 60 days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 surface will be refined
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 after this stage that the thin You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 will be grooved
 and glued by black lead This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 putting the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slat
 sheet over likewise
 sandwich. All compact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 have been brought
 to apply with a molding technique called This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-pressing including heat feed. As a result
, a cutting machine has The past tense and past participle of the verb "split" is "split". Alternatively you could use "separated" or "divided".splitseparateddivided
splitted
 off those compositions of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
slats
 to the pencil bars. Finally
, the pencils have been painted
, sharpened and stamped the logo This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "summed", the past tense form of the verb 'sum'?summedsuedfumedSMEDspumed
sumed
 as a package at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. 