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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Vb8Q
The two maps display road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 and there are several changes which were fulfilled in 2010. Both maps represents that how increment of services had done in 2010 as compare to 2007. To begin with, in 2007, the city road was linked with hospital road, moreover, the hospital road linked with ring road around the hospital car parking facility provided for staff and public at same place in right side of hospital road. From west to east side, there was bus stop in some distance. Additionally, in 2010, there was some changes in road construction and facilities. There was a roundabout constructed linked with bus station, city road and hospital road and after turn right towards hospital road, there was another roundabout which was connected to the bus station, staff car park and with ring road around hospital. Parking area was divided in two portion in which one is for public car park and another one for staff car park. Bus stop was relocated from east to opposite side of hospital road in west. Overall, several changes done in 2010 as compare to 2007, moreover, bus station relocated from east to west and car parking divided in two different areas for employees and outsiders. The construction of road also developed by which every area is interconnected which is beneficiary for people.
The two maps display
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access to a city
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hospital
in 2007 and 2010 and there are several
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changes
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in 2010. Both maps
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represents
that how increment of services had done in 2010 as compare to 2007.

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begin
with, in 2007, the city
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road
was linked
with
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hospital
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road
,
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, the
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hospital
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road
linked with ring
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road
around the
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hospital
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car
parking facility provided for staff and public at same place in right side of
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hospital
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road
. From west to east side, there was bus
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stop
in
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some
distance.

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, in 2010, there was
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some
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changes
in
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road
construction and facilities. There was a roundabout constructed linked with bus station, city
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road
and
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hospital
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road
and after turn right towards
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hospital
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road
, there was another roundabout which
was connected
to the bus station, staff
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car
park and with ring
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road
around
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hospital
. Parking area
was divided
in two portion in which one is for public
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car
park and another one for staff
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car
park. Bus
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stop
was relocated
from east to opposite side of
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hospital
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road
in west.

Overall
, several
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changes
done in 2010 as compare to 2007,
moreover
, bus station relocated from east to west and
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car
parking divided in two
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different
areas for employees and outsiders. The construction of
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road
also
developed by which every area
is interconnected
which is beneficiary for
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people
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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