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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Ak8e
The line graph illustrates the Canada's university total graduates from year 1992 to 2007. It is sbudivided between male and female. Overall, the female graduates dominated the total number of university graduates from the given period of time. In 1992, there were 70, 000 male university graduates and it slightly increased between 1994 and 1995. Thre trend of male graduates from university shows slight fluctuation in numbers from 1996 to 2001. University graduates who are male gradually increased between 2002 and 2006. There were almost 100, 000 female graduates from university in 1992 and the numer of graduates rose to approximately 105, 000 in 1995. However, the number of female university graduates declined back to 100, 000 and remain steady until 2001. From 2002 to 2006, graduates from the univeristy who are female dramatically rose until it reached its peaked of almost 150, 000. In conclusion, there were more female graduates from university than male graduates from year 1992 to 2006.
The line graph illustrates the Canada's
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total
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from year 1992 to 2007. It is
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sbudivided
between male and female.

Overall
, the
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female
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graduates
dominated the total number of
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university
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graduates
from the
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period of time.

In 1992, there were 70, 000 male
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university
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graduates
and it
slightly
increased between 1994 and 1995.
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trend of male
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from
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university
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shows
slight fluctuation in numbers from 1996 to 2001.
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University
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graduates
who are male
gradually
increased between 2002 and 2006.

There were almost 100, 000
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female
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graduates
from
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university
in 1992 and the
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numer
of
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graduates
rose to approximately 105, 000 in 1995.
However
, the number of
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female
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university
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graduates
declined back to 100, 000 and remain steady until 2001. From 2002 to 2006,
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graduates
from the
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univeristy
who are
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female
dramatically
rose until it reached its peaked of almost 150, 000.

In conclusion
, there were more
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female
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graduates
from
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university
than male
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graduates
from year 1992 to 2006.
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