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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the total world population in four countries (India, China, USA and Japan) in 1950, 2002, and predicted figures for 2050.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the total world population in four countries (India, China, USA and Japan) in 1950, 2002, and predicted figures for 2050. J2yE
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the total world population in four countries (India, China, USA and Japan) in 1950, 2002, and predicted figures for 2050. Overall, the figures for the proportion of world population decreased for all countries except India. Additionally, India is the only country where the proportion of world population is expected to have increased by 2050. In 1950 and 2002, China made up the greatest proportion of world population, despite a slight decrease in its figures from approximately 23% to 20%. Similarly, the USA and Japan also experienced a decline of around 2% over the same period, with figures at around 5% and 2. 5% respectively in 2002. In contrast, the opposite could be seen India where the figure increased from approximately 15% to 17% in 2002. In 2050, the figures for China and Japan are predicted to continue to drop to around 15% and 2% respectively, while the figure for the USA is likely to remain unchanged, at 5%. Meanwhile, India's percentage of world population is projected to continue rising to 19%
The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of the total
world
population
in four countries (India, China, USA and Japan) in 1950, 2002, and predicted
figures
for 2050.

Overall
, the
figures
for the
proportion
of
world
population
decreased for all countries except India.
Additionally
, India is the
only
country where the
proportion
of
world
population
is
expected
to have increased by 2050.

In 1950 and 2002, China made up the greatest
proportion
of
world
population
, despite a slight decrease in its
figures
from approximately 23% to 20%.
Similarly
, the USA and Japan
also
experienced a decline of around 2% over the same period, with
figures
at around 5% and 2. 5%
respectively
in 2002.
In contrast
, the opposite could be
seen
India where the
figure
increased from approximately 15% to 17% in 2002.

In 2050, the
figures
for China and Japan
are predicted
to continue to drop to around 15% and 2%
respectively
, while the
figure
for the USA is likely to remain unchanged, at 5%. Meanwhile, India's percentage of
world
population
is projected
to continue rising to 19%
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the total world population in four countries (India, China, USA and Japan) in 1950, 2002, and predicted figures for 2050.

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