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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two diagrams illustrates the location options and how wave-energy machine works. The wave-energy machine can have two location options. The first one is the high installation costs which produces large waves that may result to high output. The second option is the low installation costs that create small waves and low output. The machine that produces wave energy has several parts for it to work. It is installed where the water is then when the water level increased the air flow will passed through a chamber that will be directed to the turbine. Afterwards, the air flow will be release to the machine. The wave-energy machine also received and airflow from the air the will fo through the turbine and passed the chamber again until it reaches the water. To sum up, the wave-energy machine has two chambers and the turbine changes the flow of energy and it is also connected to the electricity generator.

The two diagrams illustrates the location options and how wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
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 works.

The wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
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 can have two location options. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
 one is the high installation costs which produces large waves that may result to high output. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 second option is the low installation costs that create This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 waves and low output.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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machine
 that produces wave energy has several parts for it to work. It is installed
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. The wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
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 through the turbine and passed the chamber again until it reaches the water.

To sum up, the wave-energy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
 has two chambers and the turbine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 the flow of energy and it is also
 connected to the electricity generator. 