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the graph shows the differences in wheat export

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The line graph depicts the differences in wheat exports over three different kinds of countries between 1985 and 1990. The trends show wheat exportation as millions of tonnes in Australia, Canada and European Community. Overall, however, the differences between countries was quite similar amounts at the beginning of time, the interval increased at the end of the given period. It can be seen clearly that Canada had the highest amount of wheat exportation in 1985 with around 20 million of tonnes. After that, the amount decreased moderately until 1986. Following the year, it rose rapidly and reached a peak with 25 million of tonnes in 1988. In addition, there was fluctuation between 1988 and 1990 in the export amount of Canada. On the other hand, the amount of wheat exportation of the European Community was approximately 17 million of tonnes in 1985. The export of the European Community reached over 20 million of tonnes at 1990 and it was the highest amount of wheat export in 1990.
The line graph depicts the differences in
wheat
exports
over three
different
kinds of countries between 1985 and 1990. The trends
show
wheat
exportation as
millions
of tonnes in Australia, Canada and European Community.
Overall
,
however
, the differences between countries was quite similar
amounts
at the beginning of time, the interval increased at the
end
of the
given
period. It can be
seen
clearly
that Canada had the highest
amount
of
wheat
exportation in 1985 with around 20
million
of tonnes. After that, the
amount
decreased
moderately
until 1986. Following the year, it rose
rapidly
and reached a peak with 25
million
of tonnes in 1988.
In addition
, there was fluctuation between 1988 and 1990 in the
export
amount
of Canada.
On the other hand
, the
amount
of
wheat
exportation of the European Community was approximately 17
million
of tonnes in 1985. The
export
of the European Community reached over 20
million
of tonnes at 1990 and it was the highest
amount
of
wheat
export
in 1990.
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