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the two maps below show an island

On the two maps given information illustrate difference among both of islands apparently since figures illustrate all crucial factors with details. As shown in the first figure, before the island had two main zones so these are beach and ground field. Beyond this, in the past there had no any permit for road, bulidings and essentially for accommodations. Map portrays that, in the past island's obviously had not any evolvment. With regard to the second map figures report that later radical revises intervene since at the centre of the island there have grandiose restraunt and in front of it there is a reception. As well as that, in the right and left areas of the restaurant innovative accommadations are built by indiviuals with big prosperity. Finally, at the near side of beach swimming area allowed for people and new pier is constructed by people for tourists and visiters. In addition, two modern steamers are available for all people.
On the two maps
given
information illustrate difference among both of islands
apparently
since figures illustrate all crucial factors with
details
.

As shown in the
first
figure,
before
the island had two main zones
so
these are beach and ground field. Beyond this, in the past there had
no
any permit for road,
bulidings
and
essentially
for accommodations. Map portrays that,
in the past island
's
obviously
had not any
evolvment
.

With regard to the second map figures report that later radical revises intervene since at the
centre
of the island there have grandiose
restraunt
and in front of it there is a reception.
As well
as that, in the right and
left
areas of the restaurant innovative
accommadations
are built
by
indiviuals
with
big
prosperity.
Finally
, at the near side of beach swimming area
allowed
for
people
and new pier
is constructed
by
people
for tourists and
visiters
.
In addition
, two modern steamers are available for all
people
.
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IELTS academic the two maps below show an island

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6.0
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