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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The given two maps provide information an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. In the first maphave palms, sea and beach. In this map have less things. But in the second map have a lot of things. Accommodations, palms, restaurant, pier, reception, beach and also sea. In these islands have very big differences. In the first island have only three things. But in the second island have many things and people can live easily in the second island. Because in the second map have many conveniences and accommodations, one restaurant and one big reception. On every side these accommodations have footpath and nearby reception have vehicle tracks. So, in the second map also has beach and around this beach people can swim. In general, two maps illustrate an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. In the first map have few things and people cannot come and live there. But in the second map have many facilities and people can live there without problems.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

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