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The table below describe the number of people in million who went for international travel in 1990, 1995 ,2000, 2005

The table illustrates how many individuals were participated in global travel in 4 years at 5 region (Africa America Asia and the Pacific Europe middle East). As regard the numerous people who visit Europe, witnessed the highest figure in 2005. By contrast, Middle East had only 9. 8 million people in 1990. Africa displayed an increasing trend in its proportion of visiting masses throughout the period. It is evident that, America saw considerable fluctuations in the vistors rate, with highs during the 2000 and lows during the 1990. The total number of individuals were 448. 9, 615. 2, 669. 2, 693. 7 respectively in different years. Although, last three areas had the lowest commutators, the percentum of it increased rapidly in the 2005. Asia and the Pacific and Europe was initiated at 60. 2 and 280. 2 millions in 1990 and increasing to 135. 8, 400. 2 in 2005, the data of travellers in both areas by 2. 9 million in 1995 and 2000. Middle East experienced a decline rate in its tourist from 9. 8 to 15. 8 in 1990 and 2005 than other areas. Overall, The highest visitor was depicted in the last year while the visitor showed downward trend in first year.
The table illustrates how
many
individuals
were participated
in global travel in 4 years at 5 region (Africa America Asia and the Pacific Europe
middle East
). As regard the numerous
people
who visit Europe, witnessed the highest figure in 2005. By contrast, Middle East had
only
9. 8 million
people
in 1990. Africa displayed an increasing trend in its proportion of visiting masses throughout the period. It is evident that, America
saw
considerable fluctuations in the
vistors
rate, with highs during the 2000 and lows during the 1990. The total number of individuals were 448. 9, 615. 2, 669. 2, 693. 7
respectively
in
different
years. Although, last three areas had the lowest commutators, the
percentum
of it increased
rapidly
in the 2005. Asia and the Pacific and Europe
was initiated
at 60. 2 and 280. 2 millions in 1990 and increasing to 135. 8, 400. 2 in 2005, the data of
travellers
in both areas by 2. 9 million in 1995 and 2000. Middle East experienced a decline rate in its tourist from 9. 8 to 15. 8 in 1990 and 2005 than other areas.
Overall
, The highest visitor
was depicted
in the last
year
while the visitor
showed
downward trend in
first
year
.
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IELTS academic The table below describe the number of people in million who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000, 2005

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