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The chart below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourists market.

The bar chart illustrates the number of Janpanese people which were visiting abroad between 1985 to 1995 while line graph gives the information about Australian share of the Japanese tourist business. Overview, the number of Japanese tourists steady increased in abroad till 1990. After that, these number decreased in 1991 and in the last that number reached on the peak. However, the Australian share of Japanese tourist market on the peak in 1993. it is clearly evident that, around 4 million Japanese people were visiting abroad in 1985 and this number steady went up till 1990. In 1990, nearly ten million people traveled in other nations. Although, in 1990, this number decreased. Despite some fluctuation, the highest Japanese people traveled in other countries in 1995. Around 15 million people visited abroad in this year. Moving further, 2% Japanese people visited in Australia in 1985and this proportion rose till 1988. In 1988, close to 5 percent Australian share of Japanese market and 1989 this percentage dropped. After that, in 1993, Australian share on the peak of jana see people market.

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