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the two maps below show an island before and after the construction

the two maps below show an island before and after the construction aAbW7

The maps display an island comparison before and after some tourist facilities were constructed Overall, different types of facilities the construction of Island and in addition, the islandnd transformer for tourist attraction which people stayed hotel, play, travel in the sea. However, much of the island's and territory has remaineded virtually unchanged This is obvious from the illustration, the number of facilities were built later. First of all, the reception was constructed in the isle center. Thistle reception was cannected restaurant and pier with vehicle track. In addition, pepple used pier for travel other place Further analything the maps, many accomodation were constructed on both sides of the reception with connecting footpath. Lastly, green areas and beach were unchanged (and displayed about 25 metres ). Year by year on front of beach it was emerged swiming pool

The maps display an island comparison This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tourist facilities were constructed
Overall
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 types of facilities the construction of Island and in addition
, the Possible spelling mistake found.islandislandsislander
islandnd
 transformer for tourist attraction which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 stayed hotel, play, travel in the sea. However
, much of the island's and territory has Possible spelling mistake found.
remaineded
virtually
 unchanged

This is obvious from the illustration, the number of facilities were built
 later. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the reception was constructed
 in the isle center. Thistle reception was Possible spelling mistake found.connected
cannected
 restaurant and pier with vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
. In addition
, Possible spelling mistake found.people
pepple
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 pier for travel other place Further
Possible spelling mistake found.anythinganalyzing
analything
 the maps, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
were constructed
 on both sides of the reception with connecting footpath. Lastly
, green areas and beach were unchanged
 (and displayed about 25 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
 )
. Year by year on front of beach it was emerged
Possible spelling mistake found.swimmingswiping
swiming
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpool.pool!pool?pool:pool,pool;
pool