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table shows social and economic indicators for Konkan fees according to the United Nations statistics.

table shows social and economic indicators for Konkan fees according to the United Nations statistics. 9rEq0

The table compares the statistic of four different countries with regards of four social and economic indicators according to the United Nations statistics. As evident from the table Japan is number one in the term of annual income for a person the. The life expectancy at the birth is also the highest, closely followed by Canada. In terms of adultliteracy rate in both the country stand with 99% the daily calorie supply a person is the highest in Canada with 3326. Japan should be class as the most developed among these countries because it has the highest figure of three out of four indicators also Hai daily calorie supply per person need to be optimised not maximum does cal supply required for an average people need not to be indicator of development beyond the point. Zaire, on the other hand has the lowest figure of for all the indicators which determines the physical quality of the life of the population has to be improved a lot in its government policy the life expectancy at the birth is very low 47. On the other hand Canada in Japan will be the more aged population sciatica senior citizens due to high life expectancy at birth through not exactly at the bottom is having figure towards the lowest and and will be reckoned as the least developed country.

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