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The graph below shows how prices of “high-tech gadgets” changed over time in Some country. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.

The graph below shows how prices of “high-tech gadgets” changed over time in Some country. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown. mbgq1

The line graph demonstrates the swamping of prices of two particular types of gadgets from the year 2004 to 2006. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that for both devices the price climbed down than the initial price. In the case of smartphones, the price went down by around 300 dollars, while the price of the navigation system dropped by 1220 dollars. To begin with the navigation system, in 2004, initially, the price was close to 4000, then until 2005, the cost was dropped down sharply to 3200 dollars. After January 2005, the worth began to decrease slowly up to July then it rose linearly to 3400 dollars. Over the period 2006, it rapidly dropped to below 3000 dollars. Turning to the smartphones, at the beginning the price was just over 3000 dollars, after that, it gradually decreased to approximately 2800 dollars. In the next 6 months, the price grew slowly and at the end of 2005, the cost stood at 2900 dollars. After, rest of the period it tended to decrease and end at the same amount of navigation system.

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. In the next
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