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The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995.

The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995. 3PXY

The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995. In 1995, there was farmland located in North East area of the town and beneath it on the west side of the town was a forest. Meanwhile, on the opposite side to the west, several houses were built along both sides of the road. Besides that, there was a large fishing port, a fish market, and several shops by the seashore. Finally, on the southeast corner, there was a hotel and a coffee shop right across the road. At the present, both the forest and farmland were demolished to make rooms for a sport area that included a tennis court and a golf course. In the North, several houses and also a new path heading west was built. In addition, the fishing port and fish market were removed to replace by by the new restaurants and apartments. Overall, is clearly the tourist arrival of this town must have increased a great deal therefore it has many development on the infrastructures of this town.

The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 in British since 1995.

In 1995, there was farmland located in North East area of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and beneath it on the west side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 was a forest. Meanwhile, on the opposite side to the west, several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were built
 along both sides of the road. Besides
 that, there was a large fishing port, a fish market, and several shops by the seashore. Finally
, on the southeast corner, there was a hotel and a coffee shop right across the road.

At the present, both the forest and farmland were demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 rooms for a sport area that included a tennis court and a golf course. In the North, several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and also
 a new path heading west was built
. In addition
, the fishing port and fish market were removed
 to replace Possible typo: you repeated a wordby
by by
 the new restaurants and apartments.

Overall
, is clearly
 the tourist arrival of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
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must
 have increased a great deal therefore
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many
 development on the infrastructures of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. 