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The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995.

The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995. 3PXY
The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995. In 1995, there was farmland located in North East area of the town and beneath it on the west side of the town was a forest. Meanwhile, on the opposite side to the west, several houses were built along both sides of the road. Besides that, there was a large fishing port, a fish market, and several shops by the seashore. Finally, on the southeast corner, there was a hotel and a coffee shop right across the road. At the present, both the forest and farmland were demolished to make rooms for a sport area that included a tennis court and a golf course. In the North, several houses and also a new path heading west was built. In addition, the fishing port and fish market were removed to replace by by the new restaurants and apartments. Overall, is clearly the tourist arrival of this town must have increased a great deal therefore it has many development on the infrastructures of this town.
The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
in British since 1995.

In 1995, there was farmland located in North East area of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
and beneath it on the west side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
was a forest. Meanwhile, on the opposite side to the west, several
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
were built
along both sides of the road.
Besides
that, there was a large fishing port, a fish market, and several shops by the seashore.
Finally
, on the southeast corner, there was a hotel and a coffee shop right across the road.

At the present, both the forest and farmland
were demolished
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
rooms for a sport area that included a tennis court and a golf course. In the North, several
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
and
also
a new path heading west
was built
.
In addition
, the fishing port and fish market
were removed
to replace
Possible typo: you repeated a word
by by
the new restaurants and apartments.

Overall
, is
clearly
the tourist arrival of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have increased a great deal
therefore
it has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
development on the infrastructures of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
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IELTS academic The two maps above provide data on the developments and alterations of the specific area of a coastal town in British since 1995.

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