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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Yj1B
The line graph illustrates the state of unemployment in Australia between two categories (rural and urban areas), through the four quarters of the year 2012. Overall, the rate of unemployment in the rural areas decreased in the fourth quarter, while for urban areas it increased in the fourth quarter. At the start of the year the rural area had the highest percentage of unemployment rate between the two sections. With regard to rural areas, according to the graph unemployment rate started with almost 7 percent in the first quarter, which then fell to well-under 5 percent in the second quarter, fluctuated a bit in the third quarter and settled at 5 percent in the fourth quarter. On the other hand, the unemployment situation in urban areas when we compare to rural areas started at just over 2 percent in the first quarter, then rose dramatically to 4% in the second quarter and fell back to the initial starting point and finally rising to almost 5 percentage in the fourth quarter.
The line graph illustrates the state of
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unemployment
in Australia between two categories
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(rural
and urban
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areas)
, through the four
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quarters
of the year 2012.

Overall
, the rate of
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unemployment
in the
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rural
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areas
decreased in the
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fourth
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quarter
, while for urban
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areas
it increased in the
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fourth
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quarter
. At the
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start
of the year the
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rural
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area
had the highest percentage of
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unemployment
rate between the two sections.

With regard to
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rural
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areas
, according to the graph
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unemployment
rate
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started
with almost 7
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percent
in the
first
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quarter
, which then fell to well-under 5
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percent
in the second
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quarter
, fluctuated a bit in the third
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quarter
and settled at 5
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percent
in the
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fourth
quarter.

On the other hand
, the
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unemployment
situation in urban
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areas
when we compare to
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rural
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areas
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started
at
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just
over 2
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percent
in the
first
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quarter
, then rose
dramatically
to 4% in the second
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quarter
and fell back to the initial starting point and
finally
rising to almost 5 percentage in the
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fourth
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quarter
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
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