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The two maps above illustrate how the town of the coastal village of Seaville changed over a 30 year period, from 1980 to 2010.

The two maps above illustrate how the town of the coastal village of Seaville changed over a 30 year period, from 1980 to 2010. gKJ3
The two maps above illustrate how the town of the coastal village of Seaville changed over a 30 year period, from 1980 to 2010. Overall, there was considerable development of the settlement over these years, and it was gradually transformed from small town into a largely residential population area. Over the period surveyed, only the hotel in the bast of Seaville remained unchanged. In response to the considerable increase in population the hospital were extended to around double the size of the East Bank. The sand Dunes and tea room in the south east of Seaville was demolished to make space for a new hotel and restaurant; whereas, the woodlands in the north west were cut down for a golf course. In 1980, the holiday cottages that can be seen to the west of Seaville, no longer existed by 2010, having been replaced by Permanent houses. There also used to be an extensive property standing in area situated to the north west of Seaville. At some time, from 1980 to 2010, this was extended and converted into Retumentand Boat club. This was another significant transformation for the Seaville.
The two maps above illustrate how the town of the coastal village of
Seaville
changed
over a
30 year
period, from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, there was considerable development of the settlement over these years, and it was
gradually
transformed from
small
town into a
largely
residential population area.

Over the period surveyed,
only
the hotel in the bast of
Seaville
remained unchanged. In response to the considerable increase in population the hospital
were extended
to around double the size of the East Bank. The sand Dunes and tea room in the
south east
of
Seaville
was demolished
to
make
space for a new hotel and restaurant; whereas, the woodlands in the
north west
were
cut
down for a golf course.

In 1980, the holiday cottages that can be
seen
to the west of
Seaville
, no longer existed by 2010, having
been replaced
by Permanent
houses
. There
also
used
to be an extensive property standing in area situated to the
north west
of
Seaville
. At
some
time, from 1980 to 2010, this
was extended
and converted into
Retumentand
Boat club. This was another significant transformation for the
Seaville
.
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IELTS academic The two maps above illustrate how the town of the coastal village of Seaville changed over a 30 year period, from 1980 to 2010.

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