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The map below we show that three possible location for a leisure center. A location is going to be enjoyed place in their. Because there has been more than facilities and which is being highly improved day by day. In addition environment will be properly enouge B location. Which will be start-ups new company in the business so that people will be get a expensive profit. I think B location must to be perfect for a spend more then time. C location saw natural view that it would be arrived a lot people for traveling and spend free time. It has keeping on for since 20-40 in my opinoin. There have been interested many people for see the nature. Three possible locations for a leisure center in my opinoin thats will be mind blowing plan.
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IELTS academic The map below we show that three possible location for a leisure center.

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