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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today WpMb

The given map illustrates the various changes which have taken place from 1920 to present in Green park. Overall, it is apparent that the park has been dramatically transformed over the given period. To begin with an old map, there were two entrance gates in the park one was in the north side on Arnold Avenue, and another was in south side Eldon Street, but now one new entrance is also constructed from the underground car park. There were many seats in every direction of the park. There was three rose garden there one was in the north-west, and one was on the south-west side but now only two gardens in the park. Furthermore, the stage for musicians was located on the west side of the park, which was replaced by the Amphitheatre for concerts. A new rose garden constructed over the place of the fountain in the centre of the park and many seats surrounds it. Pond for water plants and glasshouse were replaced by children’s play area and water feature respectively.

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 seats surrounds it. Pond for water plants and glasshouse were replaced
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