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The bar chart below gives information on the sales of two different types of dining tables by Crestar Furniture between 2017 and 2020.summarize the information by selecting the relevant points.

The bar chart below gives information on the sales of two different types of dining tables by Crestar Furniture between 2017 and 2020. bRnW
The provided diagram below compares how many kinds of dining tables, namely 6-seater and 4-seater were sold by Crestar Furniture, from 2017 to 2020. Overall, it is clear that at the beginning six-seater dining tables were highly in demand in Crestar furniture's production. After some years, the trend completely turned upside down, leading to a sharp rise in the popularity of 4-seater tables. In 2017, the sales of 6-seater tables reached the top of the list with the rooftop number making up 90. The number then steadily decreased by almost 10 after every two years until it hit a trough at around 55 at the end of the period. By contrast, despite embarking the period upon the low of approximately 30, the quantity of 4-seater tables sold kept going up year by year. Whilst standing just around 32 in 2018, the figure for four-seaters' sales plummeted to 70 over the next year prior to ending up with well over 80 in 2020. It is interesting to note that the difference between the sales of both types of tables was not that remarkable in 2019 at which time only 5 more four-seater tables were sold than 6-seater ones.
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years, the trend completely turned upside down, leading to a sharp rise in the popularity of 4-seater tables.

In 2017, the sales of 6-seater
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reached the top of the list with the rooftop number making up 90. The number then
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around 32 in 2018, the figure for four-seaters' sales plummeted to 70 over the
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prior to ending up with well over 80 in 2020.

It is interesting to note that the difference between the sales of both types of
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tables
was not that remarkable in 2019 at which time
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IELTS academic The bar chart below gives information on the sales of two different types of dining tables by Crestar Furniture between 2017 and 2020.

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