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the two map show the construction of factilities BYxrd

The two maps demonstrate how the constructions of some tourist facilities on the island transform in after some developments during a period of time. It can be seen clearly that the island was opened up with more infrastructure and amenities including where people can rest, eat, entertain and visit around easily instead of the extensive wasteland which nothing services previously. However, speaking of the new developments on the islands, there was a pier for boat to access the entrance into the reception building. And along to the vehicle track behind the reception was a restaurant. To the west of the reception was appeared more accommodations which had a footpath to connect each house. In addition, everyone was able to swim around the beach which belonged to the west of the island. Although this place was so a natural beach that visitors could not swim in the past. At the same time, to the east of the island, there were also some accommodations which had the same particular trait to the other. Despite having a lot of man-made features on the island, there was a part of green place which almost unchanged in the east.

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 tourist facilities on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
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some
 developments during a period of time.

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 up with more infrastructure and amenities including where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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instead
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islands
, there was a pier for boat to access the entrance into the reception building. And along to the vehicle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
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 more accommodations which had a footpath to connect each This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. In addition
, everyone was able to swim around the beach which belonged to the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. Although this place was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 a natural beach that visitors could not swim in the past.

At the same time, to the east of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, there were also
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some
 accommodations which had the same particular trait to the other. Despite having This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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man
-made features on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
, there was a part of green place which almost unchanged in the east. 