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Swing basket model comparison

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According to this diagram, we can make comparisons. First, Method A can cover only one to two meters, which if the river is seasonal, the indigenous people who use this method will probably have problems in hot and dry seasons. But in model B, naturally, due to the use of a better drainage system and also the replacement of the human factor with the animal factor, it is possible to create high efficiency and cover about fifty meters of a water well. Second, using ropes and pulleys will naturally use less force and the animal agent will use less force. Third, in method A, two factors are used and in method B, one factor is used. Fourth, in method B, a bucket is used and in method A, a bamboo box is used. Of course, in this case, too, it can be said that in water transfer, using a bucket, more water is wasted than transferring with a bucket. Finally, I must say that with the research I have done, we can see that method B is better than method A in every way.

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