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The given Diagram show a things about sports activities As per Girls, Boys And Adults. Overall, Girls was played All of the games and mostly They are play Hockey and Swimming. Boys And Adults keep Swimming and Football to much. In detail, out of 25 girls play basketball and 50 boys play basketball. Many of boys play All of this games. Adults are play mostly Basketball and Tennis. They all Are play many games but boys and girls play mostly sports game than Adults.
The
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given
Diagram
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show
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a things
about sports activities As per
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Girls
,
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Boys
And
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Adults
.
Overall
,
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Girls
was played
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All of the
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games
and
mostly
They are
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play
Hockey and Swimming.
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Boys
And
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Adults
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keep
Swimming and Football
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to
much. In detail, out of 25
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girls
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play
basketball and 50
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boys
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play
basketball.
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Many
of
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boys
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play
All of
Did you mean "these"?
this
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games
.
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Adults
are
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play
mostly
Basketball and Tennis. They all Are
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play
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many
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games
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but
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boys
and
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girls
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play
mostly
sports
Use "gamer" to make a comparison with this adjective.
game
than
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Adults
.
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IELTS academic Study the bar chart below. Notice that you have to estimate some of the numbers. Answer the questions.

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1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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