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The table below shows the production and consumption of natural gas in different countries in 2001.

The table below shows the production and consumption of natural gas in different countries in 2001. 6lMJ3
The rendered tabular illustrations shows the information about the utilization and creation of natural gas in different territories in the starting of 21st century. The given data is calibrated in million of tonnes. Overall, the generation and usage of gas was highest in United States Of America as compared to other countries. Having a cursory glance on chart, it is clear that in year 2001, the production of natural gas in United States Of America was 5000 million tonnes. However, consumption of gas was inclined with 88. 9 millions of tonnes. Furthermore, in Japan and South Korea the formation of gas was totally negligible whereas, they do the usage of gas 68. 6 and 18. 9 millions of tonnes respectively. Moreover Australia and China produced near about same gas however their rate of usage was quite different. After analysing the remaining data, the production of gas in New Zealand was 5. 1 millions tonnes while the usage of gas was declined with approximately 0. 1 million of tonnes. Furthermore, in 2001 the United Kingdom generates 97. 3 millions of tonnes of natural gas, the United Arab Emirates produce 35. 9 millions of tonnes and for Former Soviet Union create 0. 4 millions of tonnes of natural gas. Moreover, the utilization of natural Gas in all these three countries was totally different from each other.
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