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The maps illustrate the developments of Co/wick Arts Centre between 2005 and today.

The maps illustrate the developments of Co/wick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. LGgMp
The maps illustrate the developments of Co/wick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. Over the period, the area changes dramatically, including new buildings, the centre expanded and the new facilities Originally, there were two galleries on the right side of the space, each with two distinct structures, whereas concert hall has been expanded. The Gallery was relocated to the Art Centre's left side. The concert hall and cinema building were demolished. However, in their place the authorities placed a central exhibition area and also constructed two additional building next to each other for a cinema and drama studio Furthermore, instead of being one huge space, the meeting room was split into two smaller rooms to the left of the drama studio. The information desk remained in the same area when it came to locations for general use. In addition, a new leisure space with a stage, trees, and an outdoor exhibition and performance area was created in the Wasteland region. Finally, the toilet was moved to the right side of the room and its size was reduced
The maps illustrate the developments of Co/wick Arts
Centre
between 2005 and
today
. Over the period, the
area
changes
dramatically
, including new buildings, the
centre
expanded and the new facilities

Originally
, there were two galleries on the right side of the space, each with two distinct structures, whereas concert hall has
been expanded
. The Gallery
was relocated
to the Art
Centre
's
left
side. The concert hall and cinema building
were demolished
.
However
, in their place the authorities placed a central exhibition
area
and
also
constructed two additional building
next
to each other for a cinema and drama studio

Furthermore
,
instead
of being one huge space, the meeting room
was split
into two smaller rooms to the
left
of the drama studio. The information desk remained in the same
area
when it came to locations for general
use
.
In addition
, a new leisure space with a stage, trees, and an outdoor exhibition and performance
area
was created
in the Wasteland region.
Finally
, the toilet was
moved
to the right side of the room and its size was
reduced
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