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The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The map illustrate the development on an island due to some tourism facilities. Overall, the deserted area was converted into tourist spot without destroying natural beauty of island. Conspicuously, the island was spread in 100 meters, surrounded by sea in north and south. In west direction there was a beach, moreover inside the island there was a abandon place with few coconut trees. However, after some time restaurant and reception area was constructed, moreover footpath and vehicle track was made for tourist to do walk. In East swimming area was made. In addition trees and plants are not gutted during construction. Similarly, accommodation units were builted on both sides of reception which is connected by footpath. The pier area was made for boating in the South Side of island.
The map illustrate the development on an
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island
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tourism facilities.
Overall
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area
was converted
into tourist spot without destroying natural beauty of island.

Conspicuously
, the
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island
was spread
in 100 meters, surrounded by sea in north and south. In west direction there was a beach,
moreover
inside the
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island
there was a abandon place with few coconut trees.
However
, after
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some
time restaurant and reception
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area
was constructed
,
moreover
footpath and vehicle
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track
was made
for tourist to do walk. In East swimming
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area
was made
.
In addition
trees and plants are not gutted during construction.
Similarly
, accommodation units
were builted
on both sides of reception which
is connected
by footpath. The pier
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area
was made
for boating in the South Side of
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island
.

IELTS academic The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

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