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The figure show the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people.

The rendered bar graph illustrate information regarding the result of survey held in USA, UK, Mexico, Japan, and Egypt to ask the young generation about the right age to get rights and responsibilities. Overall, in Japan the adolescents prefer maximum age to get rights whereas in Mexico youngsters prefer minimum age. Conspicuously, the adolescents in America say they 18 years was right age to get marry and vote whereas, for criminal responsibility 12 years was right age. The youngsters in United Kingdom say that 21 years was right age to get marry, meanwhile for voting and criminal responsibility the right age was between 17-15 years. Furthermore, in Mexico adolescents say that the right age to get marry, vote and for criminal responsibility was between 17-16 years. In Japan adolescents say 23 was right age to get marry and 20 for voting and criminal responsibility. In addition, the adolescents in Egypt sat that 16 was right age to get marry, 18 for voting and 13 for criminal responsibility.
The rendered bar graph illustrate information regarding the result of survey held in USA, UK, Mexico, Japan, and Egypt to ask the young generation about the
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in America say they 18 years was
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12 years was
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. The youngsters in United Kingdom say that 21 years was
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was between 17-15 years.
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was between 17-16 years. In Japan
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say 23 was
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in Egypt sat that 16 was
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IELTS academic The figure show the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people.

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