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The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts depict the results of the survey conducted among MBA graduates and employers. Overall, the highest percent of people do their degree for better job opportunities. whereas the employers give jobs based on a different perspective. But mostly they give job based on working experience and a good personality. According to the survey, the pie chart on the left shows how graduates select their MBA courses based on different features. They are better job opportunities, personal development, ability to help others, and ability to do the job better. This pie chart shows that 65% of the graduates think that the reason for choosing an MBA is the better job opportunities. The remaining 15% believe that an MBA could give a better ability to do the job; 12% assume that personal development as the main reason to choose the course where only 8% of the former students said that the best reason to take an MBA is the ability to help others. On the other hand, employers hire employees base on different categories like personality, presentation/appearance, previous experience, and qualifications. To which Employers give 25% preference to MBA graduates with having prior experience in the field (knowledge) and a good personality. And 20% for candidates with good looking and connections. Only 10% attention to the qualification of the applicant.
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graduates
and employers.

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, the highest percent of
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people
do their degree for
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better
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job
opportunities. whereas the employers
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give
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jobs
based on a
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different
perspective.
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But
mostly
they
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give
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job
based on working experience and a
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good
personality.

According to the survey, the pie chart on the
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left
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how
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graduates
select their MBA courses based on
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different
features. They are
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better
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job
opportunities, personal development,
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ability
to
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help
others, and
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ability
to do the
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job
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better
. This pie chart
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shows
that 65% of the
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graduates
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think
that the reason for choosing an MBA is the
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better
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job
opportunities. The remaining 15% believe that an MBA could
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give
a
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better
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ability
to do the
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job
; 12% assume that personal development as the main reason to choose the course where
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only
8% of the former students said that the best reason to take an MBA is the
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ability
to
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help
others.

On the other hand
, employers hire employees base on
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different
categories like personality, presentation/appearance, previous experience, and qualifications. To which Employers
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give
25% preference to MBA
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graduates
with having prior experience in the field (knowledge) and a
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good
personality. And 20% for candidates with
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good
looking and connections.
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Only
10% attention to the qualification of the applicant.

IELTS academic The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates chose their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.

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4 paragraphs
221 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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