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the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003-2006.

The bar chart represents the proportion of adults by age group using the internet from 2003 to 2006 in United Kingdom. Overall, data reveals that the Lion's share of internet was used by the age group between 16-24. However, the nethermost amount of the age group of 65+ in every year. It can be clearly seen from the data. In year 2005, the maximum amount of internet was used by the age group of 16-24 and the lowest Internet was used by 65+ age group in same year. Furthermore, in year 2006 slightly low Internet was used by same group and same amount of Internet was used in 2004 and 2003. On the other hand, in both age groups 25-44 and 45 - 54 the Internet used in 2006 was same and almost double of age group of 55-64. However, the fluctuation in the amount of Internet usuage was seen in the age groups of adults and 45-55 in year 2003, 2004and2005. However, the usage of internet in year 2003, 2004 and 2005 was almost same in age group 55-64.
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using the internet from 2003 to 2006 in United Kingdom.

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by the
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between 16-24.
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, the nethermost
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of the
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of 65+ in every year.

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2005, the maximum
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of internet was
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of 16-24 and the lowest Internet was
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by 65+
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in same
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.
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, in
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2006
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low Internet was
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and same
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in 2004 and 2003.

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25-44 and 45 - 54 the Internet
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in 2006 was same and almost double of
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of 55-64.
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, the fluctuation in the
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of Internet usuage was
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in the
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of adults and 45-55 in
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2003, 2004and2005.
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, the usage of internet in
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2003, 2004 and 2005 was almost same in
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55-64.

IELTS academic the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003-2006.

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