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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

These two maps shows main office in Accountancy. It is clear from the map that there a lot of changing and developing. According to what is shown, before we have many rooms and every room was have desks, faxes, copiers. So, in the new style we have all desks in the middle and same thing for faxes and copiers. Before we have scattered desk, faxes and copiers, I think the new style good and make thing look better and more orgnaiser. Then, we have 4 rooms disappear and there are New customers room, Processing room, Payroll office and Accounts office. While, Lunch room and Storage room became smaller than before. And Entrance became bigger with new front desk and sofas. And new sofa in the Middle of office. And with all that changing there are two thing do not changing at all. There are Meeting room and Manager's room. To sum up, we could say that there are things disappear and others appear and a lot of developing and changing.

These two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 main office in Accountancy. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the map that there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
 and developing.

According to what is shown
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 and every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was Consider using either the past participle “had” or the present participle “having” here.hadhaving
have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desks
, faxes, copiers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 style we have all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desks
 in the middle and same thing for faxes and copiers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 we have scattered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
, faxes and copiers, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 style This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 thing look better and more Possible spelling mistake found.organizer
orgnaiser
. Then, we have 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 disappear and there are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 customers You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, Processing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, Payroll office and Accounts office.

While, Lunch You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and Storage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 became smaller than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. And Entrance became bigger with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 front You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcounter
desk
 and sofas. And You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 sofa in the Middle of office.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
And
 with all that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
 there are two Possible agreement error. Did you mean “things”?things
thing
 do not After the auxiliary verb ‘do’, use the base form of a verb. Did you mean “change”?change
changing
 at all. There are Meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and Manager's room.

To sum up, we could say that there are things disappear This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 appear and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 developing and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuncertaindynamicunstablegrowingchangeabledeveloping
changing
. 