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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

These plan shows a town in the past and improvement to now. It is clear from the picture that the town is appromaxtely changing. According to what it shown, the north side from the town is nearly completely. Now we have less homes in North, but more houses in West North. Insted the farm land, in the East North, and forest park, also in the East North, we have golf and tennis While in South part of the town, we have a new car park beside the hotel in East South, and we have restaurant instead of shops. And apartments instead of fish market, and all in South. The fishing port is disappear and sea is fulled the place. Everything in town change either less or more, disappear or appear. But just one thing was stable and it is cafe. To sum up, we could say that the town is nearly completely changed, but it is still really nice.
These plan
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in the past and improvement to
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now
. It is
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clear
from the picture that the
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town
is
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appromaxtely
changing.

According to what it
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shown
, the
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north
side from the
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town
is
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completely.
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Now
we have
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less
homes in
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North
,
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but
more
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houses
in West
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North
.
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Insted
the farm land, in the East
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North
, and forest park,
also
in the East
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North
, we have golf and
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tennis


While in South part of the
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town
, we have a new car park beside the hotel in East South, and we have restaurant
instead
of shops. And apartments
instead
of fish market, and all in South. The fishing port is
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disappear
and sea
is fulled
the place.

Everything in
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town
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change
either less or more, disappear or appear.
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one thing was
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stable and
it is
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cafe
.

To sum up, we could say that the
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is
nearly
completely
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changed
,
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but
it is
still
really
nice.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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